Chapter 1 of my novel’s first draft is hopefully finished, check it out and please give me critique
chewbaccaaah asked:
Someone opens a bag to reveal their "therapy pet" and it turns out to be a fox wearing a therapy dog vest. It steals a sandwich from another passenger and pisses (smelly)under a seat
I will cut the bit about it posing but the rest is silly also the fox is a real therapy pet alongside a scoundrel
therandomduck123 asked:
A whole flock of Canada geese has taken over the dining car!! No one’s quite sure how.
With ruined dates, a ghost bar keep, and now geese this dining car is a disaster
Give me your fucked up ideas for what should happen to a set of silly characters on a train
So apart from a pretty obvious section, I am basically finished with the 1st chapter of my novel, take a look at it beneath the read more. I hope you guys enjoy it
Writing is always a good bit of fun, here is a bit I just wrote up. It is a bit sad but it is just a random section without any context really needed
I kinda want to structure the Last Ride of the California Zephyr Novel as a kind of erratic book during the California Zephyr segment of the book, like it will have one part that’s a murder mystery then it jumps to a pair of characters falling in love, them it jumps to a character painting the views. I want it to feel very wild and moving, kind of like it is made up of multiple episodes of a slice of life show during the train segment
ALT@renegade4-13 Here is the current draft for the story under the read more, not all characters have been introduced yet, but this is what I have written so far
Final update on the whole story I’m working on for a bit, I am just going to drop in a read more. I hope you guys enjoy reading it